tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7881939249472375899.post680506541890591993..comments2023-07-02T06:31:37.951-07:00Comments on Dreams...: मन!Shaifalihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13867250558554183782noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7881939249472375899.post-86265207490474340632011-10-01T10:05:34.898-07:002011-10-01T10:05:34.898-07:00मन तो चंचल होता है , नादान ही सही |
समझाना चाहता ह...मन तो चंचल होता है , नादान ही सही |<br />समझाना चाहता है जो बाते रह गई अनकही |<br />फिर इधर उधर देखा मैने, अभी तो था यही |<br />नहीं जान पाई कब छोड़कर, मुझे ये चला गया कही |<br /><br />आपकी कविता से प्रेरणा मिल गई 4 पंक्तिया और जोड़ने की | ;)FirstTimeMotherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04803377533527303209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7881939249472375899.post-38076118104883466202011-09-27T08:02:46.114-07:002011-09-27T08:02:46.114-07:00you made me cry .... and your lovely comments .. ...you made me cry .... and your lovely comments .. i tried mailing you but had to come back to your comment section... you have a very deep romantic soul... beautifully expressed... always.. :) take care ...Flying high in the sky....https://www.blogger.com/profile/15696562802402238945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7881939249472375899.post-65480023617526611532011-09-26T06:42:30.975-07:002011-09-26T06:42:30.975-07:00Last two lines are so profound, takes one's he...Last two lines are so profound, takes one's heart away...Profound and beautifully written. Hindi poems are so charming...Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7881939249472375899.post-85649190736485114922011-09-26T03:41:08.757-07:002011-09-26T03:41:08.757-07:00Shaifal...Your words are so beautiful that i am at...Shaifal...Your words are so beautiful that i am at loss of words. i hear the song Mann Bawra and if i was a poet like you probably my comment would simulate these words.<br />Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna<br />Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna<br /><br />Bavre Se Mann, Ki Dekho Bavri Hain Baatein<br />Bavre Se Mann, Ki Dekho Bavri Hain Baatein<br />Bavri Se Dhadkaane Hain, Bavri Hain Saansen<br />Bavri Si Karwaton Se, Nindiya Door Bhaage<br />Bavre Se Nain Chaahe, Bavre Jharokhon Se, Bavre Nazaron Ko Takna.<br />Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna<br /><br />Bavre Se Is Jahan Main Bavra Ek Saath Ho<br />Is Sayani Bheed Main Bas Haathon Mein Tera Haath Ho<br />Bavri Si Dhun Ho Koi, Bavra Ek Raag Ho<br />Bavri Si Dhun Ho Koi, Bavra Ek Raag Ho<br />Bavre Se Pair Chahen, Baavron Tarano Ke, Bavre Se Bol Pe Thirakna.<br />Bavra Mann, Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna<br /><br />Bavra Sa Ho Andhera, Bavri Khamoshiyan<br />Bavra Sa Ho Andhera, Bavri Khamoshiyan<br />Thartharati Low Ho Maddham, Bavri Madhoshiyan<br />Bavra Ek Ghooghta Chahe, Haule Haule Bin Bataye, Bavre Se Mukhde Se Sarakana,<br />Bavra Mann, Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna <br />When u feel like listening http://youtu.be/HiQ40EKu-a0<br />If u want to know more of the lyricist cum singer then.<br />http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swanand_Kirkire<br /><br />Thanking you also for taking time out and going through my posts. Pls take care of all ur commitments and don't fret i know u will be there when time permits. It's the same here for me too so for some time i might not be able to post new or even read any. Pls do bear with my silence and remember when i'm back it's with a bang!Shivani Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08693724458955705943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7881939249472375899.post-39926819975545146472011-09-26T00:41:17.535-07:002011-09-26T00:41:17.535-07:00सूखे पत्ते सा मन ........मचल जाये .बहुत अच्छी लगी ...सूखे पत्ते सा मन ........मचल जाये .बहुत अच्छी लगी ये पंक्तिया ,, बस इसी तरह लिखती रहो शैफालीshashi purwarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871068133387030845noreply@blogger.com