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Mar 15, 2012

Just you!

                                 














Caged,
stiffled,
burning
inside!

Words,
sentences,
feelings
dying!

Dawn,
golden heat,
dusk
all forms!

Hours,
minutes,
seconds
all hands!

It's you 
everywhere
all the time!

at

18 comments:

  1. umashankarMar 15, 2012, 8:27:00 PM

    Intense, as the word goes. I love brevity.

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  2. Teena..Mar 16, 2012, 4:41:00 AM

    Different n nice.... loved it...

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  3. UnknownMar 16, 2012, 10:49:00 PM

    short sweet powerful dripping with feelings.......

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  4. NidhiMar 17, 2012, 1:02:00 PM

    और रचनाओं से कुछ अलग है...पर,एक चीज़...एक भाव...एक शख्स वही है.............अच्छी है.SHORT>>>CRISP>>>POWERFUL.

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  5. Flying high in the sky....Mar 18, 2012, 8:52:00 AM

    powerful...deep....sad..to the point.... and the photo ... all together mesmerising (though hurting and making me feel sad..) .... you are gifted...

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  6. NirantarMar 18, 2012, 10:06:00 AM

    with you
    I am every thing
    without you
    I am nothing ......nice

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  7. NidhiMar 18, 2012, 9:16:00 PM

    शैफाली....हर चीज़ में मेरी क्यूँ है शिरकत तुम्हारी
    अजीब है न मेरी जां यह फितरत तुम्हारी .
    short..crisp...brimming with emotions....yet,powerful.

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  8. NidhiMar 18, 2012, 9:25:00 PM

    yaar mere comment kahaan gaayab ho rahe hain...do baar comment post kar chukii huun ...nazar ek bhii nahin aa rahaa hai...spam mein gaya kyaa....agar hai to mukt kar do ........

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  9. NidhiMar 18, 2012, 9:29:00 PM

    :-))शुक्रिया!!

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  10. induravisinghjMar 19, 2012, 8:28:00 AM

    wow!!!!!!!!! great work again...Beautiful Shaifali......

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  11. संजय भास्‍कर Mar 20, 2012, 6:32:00 AM

    lovely and beautiful Shaifali ji

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  12. abhiMar 20, 2012, 8:43:00 PM

    Simply Beautiful!!

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  13. Rahul BhatiaMar 25, 2012, 7:58:00 PM

    This was just beautiful, Shaifali:)

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  14. Rohit Singh JainMar 26, 2012, 3:25:00 PM

    Awesome lines! Amazing self-expression!

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  15. Saru SinghalMar 29, 2012, 7:36:00 AM

    I really like the way you transited from first to the second paragraph. The second one is my favorite here. And you culminated it on a very beautiful note...:)

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  16. अरविन्द शुक्लApr 4, 2012, 6:13:00 AM

    आज आपके ब्लॉग पर बहुत दिनों बाद आना हुआ अल्प कालीन व्यस्तता के चलते मैं चाह कर भी आपकी रचनाएँ नहीं पढ़ पाया....बहुत बेहतरीन प्रस्‍तुति...!

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  17. RajaApr 12, 2012, 10:58:00 AM

    flows beautifully, except for the "golden heat" line, and ends in a lovely note :-)

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