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I really like the way you transited from first to the second paragraph. The second one is my favorite here. And you culminated it on a very beautiful note...:)
Intense, as the word goes. I love brevity.
ReplyDeleteDifferent n nice.... loved it...
ReplyDeleteshort sweet powerful dripping with feelings.......
ReplyDeleteऔर रचनाओं से कुछ अलग है...पर,एक चीज़...एक भाव...एक शख्स वही है.............अच्छी है.SHORT>>>CRISP>>>POWERFUL.
ReplyDeletepowerful...deep....sad..to the point.... and the photo ... all together mesmerising (though hurting and making me feel sad..) .... you are gifted...
ReplyDeletewith you
ReplyDeleteI am every thing
without you
I am nothing ......nice
शैफाली....हर चीज़ में मेरी क्यूँ है शिरकत तुम्हारी
ReplyDeleteअजीब है न मेरी जां यह फितरत तुम्हारी .
short..crisp...brimming with emotions....yet,powerful.
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ReplyDeleteDone! :)
Delete:-))शुक्रिया!!
ReplyDeletewow!!!!!!!!! great work again...Beautiful Shaifali......
ReplyDeletelovely and beautiful Shaifali ji
ReplyDeleteSimply Beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThis was just beautiful, Shaifali:)
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines! Amazing self-expression!
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you transited from first to the second paragraph. The second one is my favorite here. And you culminated it on a very beautiful note...:)
ReplyDeleteआज आपके ब्लॉग पर बहुत दिनों बाद आना हुआ अल्प कालीन व्यस्तता के चलते मैं चाह कर भी आपकी रचनाएँ नहीं पढ़ पाया....बहुत बेहतरीन प्रस्तुति...!
ReplyDeleteflows beautifully, except for the "golden heat" line, and ends in a lovely note :-)
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