Sep 26, 2011

मन!



सूखे पत्ते सा मन
आरज़ू में तुम्हारी
एक छोटे से झोके
पर भी मचल जाये.
नादाँ है यह
समझता है,
शाख से गिरकर
पा जायेगा तुम्हे,
नहीं जानता-
शाख से गिरकर
भी कोई ऊपर उठा है कभी!

5 comments:

  1. सूखे पत्ते सा मन ........मचल जाये .बहुत अच्छी लगी ये पंक्तिया ,, बस इसी तरह लिखती रहो शैफाली

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  2. Shaifal...Your words are so beautiful that i am at loss of words. i hear the song Mann Bawra and if i was a poet like you probably my comment would simulate these words.
    Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna
    Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna

    Bavre Se Mann, Ki Dekho Bavri Hain Baatein
    Bavre Se Mann, Ki Dekho Bavri Hain Baatein
    Bavri Se Dhadkaane Hain, Bavri Hain Saansen
    Bavri Si Karwaton Se, Nindiya Door Bhaage
    Bavre Se Nain Chaahe, Bavre Jharokhon Se, Bavre Nazaron Ko Takna.
    Bavra Mann Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna

    Bavre Se Is Jahan Main Bavra Ek Saath Ho
    Is Sayani Bheed Main Bas Haathon Mein Tera Haath Ho
    Bavri Si Dhun Ho Koi, Bavra Ek Raag Ho
    Bavri Si Dhun Ho Koi, Bavra Ek Raag Ho
    Bavre Se Pair Chahen, Baavron Tarano Ke, Bavre Se Bol Pe Thirakna.
    Bavra Mann, Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna

    Bavra Sa Ho Andhera, Bavri Khamoshiyan
    Bavra Sa Ho Andhera, Bavri Khamoshiyan
    Thartharati Low Ho Maddham, Bavri Madhoshiyan
    Bavra Ek Ghooghta Chahe, Haule Haule Bin Bataye, Bavre Se Mukhde Se Sarakana,
    Bavra Mann, Dekhne Chala Ek Sapna
    When u feel like listening http://youtu.be/HiQ40EKu-a0
    If u want to know more of the lyricist cum singer then.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swanand_Kirkire

    Thanking you also for taking time out and going through my posts. Pls take care of all ur commitments and don't fret i know u will be there when time permits. It's the same here for me too so for some time i might not be able to post new or even read any. Pls do bear with my silence and remember when i'm back it's with a bang!

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  3. Last two lines are so profound, takes one's heart away...Profound and beautifully written. Hindi poems are so charming...

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  4. you made me cry .... and your lovely comments .. i tried mailing you but had to come back to your comment section... you have a very deep romantic soul... beautifully expressed... always.. :) take care ...

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  5. मन तो चंचल होता है , नादान ही सही |
    समझाना चाहता है जो बाते रह गई अनकही |
    फिर इधर उधर देखा मैने, अभी तो था यही |
    नहीं जान पाई कब छोड़कर, मुझे ये चला गया कही |

    आपकी कविता से प्रेरणा मिल गई 4 पंक्तिया और जोड़ने की | ;)

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