May 21, 2014

हूक...


ये कैसी प्यास है 
जितनी बुझती उतनी उठती 
ये कैसे पल है 
जितने आते उतने बीतते 
ये कैसा बंधन है 
ना छूटे में ना बंधे में 
बस...
जीवन और तुम-में 
नदी के पाट-सा रिश्ता 
और मैं खड़ी इस पाट 
एक अनवरत हूक के साथ!

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8 comments:

  1. Sundar...gehray arth...don't know what went in ur mind but certainly know what's going into mine. First appreciation at ur composition which explains one particular aspect of a beautiful relationship which itself is a mystery. Actually the mystery is the beauty of it all. Secondly I guess it is this quest that keeps the river flowing. Anvarat hooq am I being right here Shaifali...by thinking it to not be some kind of a desire but to be a quest.
    Okay I have once again back to my pavilion...would love to see u there...and maybe u would like to listen to some things that I am posting of mine...and also some pictures that now are all mine. Pls come and have a look.
    Hugzzzzz
    Shivani

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    1. Dear Shivani, the joy of knowing certain people lies in the fact that they understand us and know the reason behind our words. I am so glad to have you as a blogger 'friend'. How right you are, to say it's a quest and not desire :)

      I will be soon giving regular appearances at your pavilion. :-) Always a pleasure.

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  2. ek hook si uthi....yeh padh kar....lajwaab...

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    1. Sush...you always have words that brings me a biggg smile :))))

      Thanks dear!

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  3. meainingful lines didi...!!!!
    becoming an admirer of yours :)

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    1. Dear Mudit, I am so happy to know you are reading. Honestly, very happy.
      Keep reading and let me know your side through comments.

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